In today's lesson, we did a peer assessment on our music videos. We went around the class and looked at our peer's music videos and filled out a sheet which had different marks band on it. The group that assessed ours will comment below with their feedback.
Your music video has the conventions of a dance music video. The party scene where the lightening is focused on the models face only and the setting is dark, adds a grunge atmosphere to the video. This is seen in typical videos like 'High all the time'. The storyline is slightly confusing, it starts off with a friendship then turns more into a romantic relationship. Next time you should focus on the narrative.
ReplyDeleteYour music video is very successful.This is because you have narrated the story-line very effectively.For example you have used very good cuts and you have used scenes with the actors which they looked very natural.The storyline is about two friends who are very close and then they start to get away from each other.I think the storyline was clear but a thing that you could improve was that although i understood it was about friendship you had so many excessive scenes of them together which made me question whether it was a friendship or a romantic relationship.Therefore i think it would be better if you remove some scenes. Additionally a thing that was very good about your video was that it had very good lighting which made your video look more professional.Overall i think this is a very good outcome and is conventional
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